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Post by Rayek on Dec 15, 2017 4:39:46 GMT
For next update, move one skill rank from Ability Mods to another line called FCB. Move the racial mods from elf in the misc column. Also, the reason for why you dont have an Aura is the alignment of your diety, not your own. That should be the last fixes, sry for missing those on the first go.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 13, 2017 5:39:58 GMT
Approved and moved.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 13, 2017 5:38:41 GMT
Approved and moved.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 13, 2017 5:37:11 GMT
I was forgetting the +1 for small, it checks out. And I failed my mathing on that gold, it also checks out.
Approved and moved.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 13, 2017 5:33:41 GMT
Approved and moved.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 13, 2017 5:32:00 GMT
Put a ten into the HP gained section of the Slayer line. Switch the 2 from FCHPS to HP gained in the Con line. Approved and moved. Please fix these on the next update.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 5:59:28 GMT
Why is your slings to hit +2?
I can not find anything else, looking good.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 5:29:25 GMT
Approved and moved.
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Sylas
Dec 10, 2017 5:21:34 GMT
Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 5:21:34 GMT
I am unsure if you could fulfill the prereq in 'Honor amongst Thieves' due to us not using the influence system. You do not gain the bonus from natural born leader yourself. Duskwalker Agent doubles your starting wealth, and only works in Katapesh. (OPT) You did look at the houserules about leadership? Why do you have a +4 misc bonus to Diplomacy?
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Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 5:09:41 GMT
Why is your to hit with the blast +4? Agile(Racial) changes your array to +DEX/WIS -INT, not DEX/CON -INT. You sepnd 17.5gp and have 40.25 left, shouldnt you have 42.5 left?
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Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 4:52:11 GMT
You only gain 2 skill ranks from cleric, currently you list 6. You get 8 HP from cleric, currently you list 7. The second line is supposed to list you ability modifiers, aka HP from CON and Skill ranks from INT. it should read -1 HP gained, 5 Skill ranks gained. You do not have toughness, not skilled, you can remove those from the second line. You only gain +2 Fort/Will and +0 Ref, from being a cleric. Only the base should be listed in the class recorder, the sheet calculates the rest in the saving throw section. You can put all of your gold in the weight n/a section. Reread the Aura(EX) ability, you would emit no aura.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 4:40:46 GMT
Both intimidate and diplo should be class skill for you, due to authorative. (OPT) There are two grenadier ATS, list which you use.
I did not see any other errors, loking good.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 4:34:34 GMT
Also, you are missing a language gained by your INT.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 4:33:35 GMT
Please make a seperate line in the class tracker, reading 'CON/INT' and list the HP you gain from CON, as well as the Skills from INT, in that lines respective boxes. Actually list the HP gained. List exp as 0/1300. List your racial abilities. Pick two traits, or 3 traits and a drawback. (OPT) You might want to purchase things like clothing food and drink, as well as mundane gear. You have 300gp starting gold and spend above 400gp.
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Post by Rayek on Dec 10, 2017 4:28:54 GMT
List exp as 0/1300. You can place money in the weight n/a portion of the currency tracker. (OPT)It is quite hard to make out your towershield proficiency as your lvl 1 feat, which I guess is the case? Please make a seperate line in the class tracker, reading 'CON/INT' and list the HP you gain from CON, as well as the Skills from INT, in that lines respective boxes. (OPT) If you ever choose skillrank/hitpoint for FCB, list that in another line.
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