Thrynder

you need to chose what weapon your weapon focus is for
we use fast track exp and it sould say 0/1300
Armor, weapons and most equipment weigh half as much for small races
you should remove the 1 out of the misc section of melee attack, if its from weapon focus cuz it only applies to greataxes
in your class recorder under barbarian you should put Con/Int mod, or Ability mod, to separate what you get from your class and what you get from your abilities. like for skill should be 4 then the next line should say -1
Engineering is knowledge or profession, not a craft
Your greataxe attack should be +5 with damage of d10+3, the power/rage should be +6 attack with d10+9
where does that +2 to perception come from?
in favoered class you need to put in barbarian not 1
you are missing common as a starting language
you are missing the 2 traits or 3 traits and one drawback, you can only take one trait per category such as one combat trait and one magic trait. also the trait bonus dont stack with each other
you havent stated if you are a hero or anti hero but since you have 2 feats at level one i can assume that you are a anti hero, but it needs to be somewhere on the sheet.
weapon and armor profiencies need to be listed somewhere as well
also money can go into weight carried N/A