Sardis
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Post by Sardis on Nov 27, 2017 16:15:23 GMT
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Post by Rechet on Nov 27, 2017 17:12:27 GMT
• a scythe is 2-handet so you get 1.5 your STR to Damage
• You only have 20 feet movement since you are wearing medium armore
• the DC of Command Undead is the same as Channel Energy so DC 11
• Torches are only 1cp each
• check your Gold and Silver (1gp = 10sp = 100cp)
• you may want to move your daily abilities to special abilities
• you can only choose 1 FCB
• your buckler will give you a -1 to attack if you use your scythe and you loss the AC from the buckler when you attack with the scythe
• Add Hero or Anti Hero
• you properly need a spell component pouch
• your deity is 3rd party and not close to your alignment
• add what skills you choose for Shards of the Past
• choose if you channel heals or damages (you have to choose damage to use Command Undead)
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Sardis
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Posts: 85
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Post by Sardis on Nov 27, 2017 23:37:19 GMT
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Sardis
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Posts: 85
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Post by Sardis on Nov 28, 2017 0:05:48 GMT
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Post by AlejoTheBear🐻 on Nov 30, 2017 2:13:09 GMT
Strix do not have the ability to speak with avians as far as i can see. They do not have a race trait called pride. You did not include Hatred or Suspicion. The racial bonus to ability scores is wrong. The double barreled musket base cost is 2,500 gold making masterwork 2,800 which is well over the amount allowed for signature moves. You must specifically pick the undeath domain which has the Death's kiss power.
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Sardis
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Post by Sardis on Dec 4, 2017 0:58:13 GMT
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Sardis
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Posts: 85
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Post by Sardis on Dec 5, 2017 0:11:08 GMT
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Sardis
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Post by Sardis on Dec 5, 2017 0:16:37 GMT
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Post by AlejoTheBear🐻 on Dec 5, 2017 0:17:19 GMT
Approved
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