Fiore, Former Slave

In your class recorder your missing you don't need to put skill points as a list instead put int mod for skill points, it should look like con/int mod, so that the top line shows 2 skill points and the next line has the 3 from you int for a total of five, keep them separated.
you should list your weapon and armor proficiency and the elven weapon familiarity
There is a place that says pool points where you can show your total amount of pool arcana and you can also list your arcana pool abilities in the feats and special abilitys section with the uses per day / used to help you take what you have.
You forgot to list the att mod for your long sword,
Also don't check off the knowledges that you don't have, you add more later but if they aren't a class skill you don't get the trained bonus to them
Fix these things and you should be good to go. Also when you fix them post your new sheet in a reply under this, don't make a new thread, and also don't save over your first sheet on your drive, always keep all versions so that you/we can see the changes that you've made

It looks approve-able to me, just so you know, you don't have to type out skill points in your class recorder, the points you get from magus can be placed in the same line as the bab and saves,
Also I well need to get a different gm to move you to approved and to verify to make sure I haven't missed anything because I am a new Gm here but it looks good.

Updated sheet following Kristal Moonhand's: "Well I'm Not Dead, Dead..."

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