jaxxon
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Post by jaxxon on Aug 24, 2017 0:21:38 GMT
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Post by Tom on Aug 24, 2017 8:32:46 GMT
List of needed changes: - Note your Racial Ability Scores mods under "Ability Scores & Racial Notes"
- Relabel Racial Traits to Racial Abilites (except for Unearth Secrets*), or otherwise distinguish the 2.
- Relabel "Everything Else" to list the different things applied there.
- Unearthed Secrets requires you to be a Hellspawn Tiefling, which is banned under fiendish heritage.
- List which bonus your heirloom weapon trait is giving
- You've only spent 15 out of 20 points on your ability scores.
- Skill ranks are capped by your hitdice, which is currently 1, remove points from diplomacy and dance
- You have one extra skill point, Beguiling Liar removes skilled and you used favored class in hitpoints (or you have one to many hit points, your choice)
- Dervish Dance requires 2 ranks in dance, which is impossible at level 1.
- Beguiling Liar is a situational buff to your bluff, don't include it in the base.
- Undercommon is not a language Teiflings can take via high bonus int.
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jaxxon
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Post by jaxxon on Aug 24, 2017 21:00:04 GMT
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Post by jaxxon on Aug 25, 2017 3:46:18 GMT
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Post by Tom on Aug 25, 2017 4:09:54 GMT
Looks Good. Approved.
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Post by jaxxon on Sept 17, 2017 13:35:04 GMT
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Post by jaxxon on Sept 17, 2017 13:48:20 GMT
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Post by jaxxon on Oct 18, 2017 23:10:10 GMT
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